Topic:

This week I got a little stuck. So, to fix that I'm adding a new character. Her name is in dispute, but I know most of the other stuff about her. I'm going to insert her chapter quite a bit back in the story, and then I'm going to give her another later on. At some point she's going to meet up with my other main characters.


Evidence:

"This was not working out well.

Three hours I had been trapped in the locker rooms, and three hours I had been able to hear the horrible maniacal laughter of the students I had thought died, waxing and waning on the other side the the wooden doors.

After drill, I had been the last one in the locker rooms changing, mostly because I left my shoes outside. I went to get them, and when I came back everyone was all changed. I hadn't even started.

It wasn't the worst turn of events ever. I hadn't gotten shot. But it was, if you considered that everyone on my team had  A: been killed by a shooter, B: turned into one of the cackling corpses or C: forced to run for their life.

Whether or not they were alive, I would not be If I didn't keep the cackling corpses outside of my safe haven."

Analysis:

The characters are really important to a story. I'm going to have to spend more time developing her. I want her to be more hard-core/kick-butt than my others. Connor is strong. He would have to be, considering how many sports he played. But this new girl is lieutenant colonel in ROTC. I haven't had much of a chance to describe her character yet, since I only have a few paragraphs,

Meaning:

Now I need to work more on developing her, developing her story, and back round. Then I need to figure out exactly what happens next.  I haven't had much of a chance to describe her character yet, since I only have a few paragraphs, thats what I need to work on the most.